Showing posts with label Border War. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Border War. Show all posts

Thursday, June 05, 2014

How to Write a Novel : Motivation


First I would like to thank the lovely Kat Carlson, D.J. Niko and the not quite as lovely but certainly very nice Jim DeFelice for their contributions to the blog over the past month. Other guest bloggers will appear on a staggered schedule. The reason it is staggered is that there is no telling when someone will hand in a blog post. Sort of like real life for editors at publishing houses.

I'm going to bounce back to our discussion of character for today's post. A lot of this is based on considering things after I read comments and e-mails people send me. I think we might have overlooked an important aspect to any novel.  As we know, a good novel must have conflict. But a character must have motivation. The motive of your character is what will drive their actions.

It's easy to make a bad guy crazy and use that as justification for his actions.  Serial killers are, by definition, psychopaths. They need no justification. But most people aren't really psychopaths. Put yourself in your character's position. What would be the motivation of a cop? Would it be simply to solve the crime or are there deeper issues? What would be the motivation for a lawyer? A quick and easy paycheck or the search for the truth?

That doesn't mean your character cannot go through an evolution of motivation. They may start the novel with one goal, but learn, over time, what's really important. There are a few instances of doing the explanation and motivation in reverse order. To me, the clearest example is one I've used before: Thomas Harris's exceptional character Hannibal Lecter. In the early books, (and movies for that matter), it's easy to write off Lecter's motivation and say he  is simply a madman. Just a soulless monster who kills and eats his victims. Happens every day. But wait. As we read the prequel, or in my case watch the movie, we see Hannibal Lecter as a teenager in Europe during World War II and the horrific events that shaped his life and turned him into the monster we first came to love in Red Dragon and Silence of the Lambs.

Your character's motivation is something you should put a lot of thought into. Understand what makes them tick and what would drive them to do something. Will it push your cop over the edge and make him break the law to stop the killer? Will the motivation to save a child turn a priest into a killer? I have no idea, that just popped into my head.

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I can use an example from the book I wrote with Lou Dobbs, Border War. The main villain in this series is Ramon Herrera, a Mexican industrialist who actually controls a cartel. In the first book he starts out as simply a drug lord looking for money, but as events occur across several books, he comes to hate the US more than he loves money. That nationalistic motivation fuels him to do remarkably diabolical things. His motivation evolved just like it might in real life. He started out as a simple drug Lord, but has become much more. If I were to be totally honest, he was barely a character in one of the early drafts until my co-writer and editor saw the value of an over-arching villain with real power. That is the sort of advantage that comes from working with others.

Think about your motivation for things you do every day.  My motivation for writing these blogs is a fear of Patty Smiley and, to a lesser extent, Jackie Winspear. Patty, because I know what she’s capable of if she is provoked and Jackie because of the accent.  My motivation to write novels is quite simply a love of writing, with a need for cash flow thrown in.

No one said you only needed a single motivation to take action.

This week's quotes are classics:

“It ain’t whatcha write, it’s the way atcha write it.”
—Jack Kerouac
“We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.”
—Ernest Hemingway



Thursday, May 01, 2014

Yes, I Am Employed !!!!!

James O. Born

As a working writer, I always try to have a project underway. In this environment of shrinking advances and declining book sales, surviving as a writer has become more difficult. In my weekly columns about how to be a writer, I strive, more than anything else, to give a realistic view of what it's like working day in and day out on a single novel, which, in many cases will never be published. But it's not all doom and gloom. Almost 10 years ago this week my first novel, Walking Money, was published by Putnam.  Over the next decade I managed to sell four more novels to Putnam as well as two science fiction novels to Tor/Forge, a division of Macmillan books. In addition to that, I have had the opportunity to work on a number of other projects in all areas of publishing and in TV. I do not have one complaint about my career in publishing so far. I have found that the people I work with are unfailingly interesting, engaged and professional. I have yet to meet an editor I did not like. That may be one of the reasons I am offered opportunities to work on unique projects. It's all part of an interesting career journey, which is about to take a slightly different path.

On May 6, Tor/Forge will release a crime thriller which I cowrote with nationally recognized TV journalist and host Lou Dobbs. It was a leap of faith for me to work so closely with a partner on a crime novel. Now, after being involved in the project for more than two years with Mr. Dobbs, I can honestly say it is been a great pleasure. So much so that we have already started work on a sequel.

Border War is a crime novel that follows the lives of federal agents on a task force located in El Paso, Texas. The interwoven stories of small time criminals, Mexican drug lords, crooked businessman and law enforcement depict life along the border in a realistic way.

You can read an excerpt of the novel at Amazon and visit my Facebook page or the Lou Dobbs Tonight page for more information.

I am scheduled to appear on his show on Monday, May 5.  The show airs on the Fox Business Channel starting at 7:00 EST and replying several times during the night.

The fun part of writing a blog like this is finally expressing what I have kept relatively quiet for two years. In addition to Border War, I have also sold a novel about a specialized police K-9 unit in Florida. The first book in that series is due to be released in about a year. It follows the careers of three young K-9 officers, each with their own unique background. It shows their commitment and love for their canine partners and all the fabulous things these dogs can do. It is the result of a great deal of research and my ability to be able to meet and interact with actual K-9 officers through my day job as a law enforcement officer. There's no reason to talk too much about this book so far from publication, except I wanted you to know I haven't been sitting around watching TV for the last few years.

Next week we will get back to the business of writing novels as we talk more about dialogue and its importance in every novel.

If you get the chance visit my author Facebook page here and let me know what you think.

Thanks for all the support over many years,


Jim Born